Johnson, "'Illuminated Woks' and Other Errata: Norton Blake 2008"
Editing and Reading Blake
"Illuminated Woks" and Other Errata: Norton Blake 2008
Mary Lynn Johnson
del. = delete
s.b = should be
^ = insert
viii
[in From The Letters]:
To George Cumberland, July 2, 1800
s.b.
To George Cumberland, August 26, 1799
xi
[2nd para., 11th line]:
600 s.b. 599
xii
^ [after "sibling"]:
niece, nephew
xiv
[Annotations and other aids, line 3]:
600 s.b. 599
xvii
Bentley, G. E. Jr., ed,
s.b.
Bentley, G. E. Jr., ed., [add period before comma]
xix
line 8:
color section s.b. color sections
xxii
58.
Milton 18/15/16/Bentley
s.b.
Milton 18/16/Bentley 15.
xxiv
86.
Additional MS. s.b. Additional MSS.
11
[Last para. of headnote, line 4]:
1822 s.b. 1819
23
n 2:
in Acts 2:2
s.b.
on Pentecost (Acts 2:2). See n. 4, p. 31 herein.
31
n 4:
[after "herein"] ^ Neither Maundy Thursday, before Easter, nor Ascension Day, the fortieth day of Eastertide (Thomas E. Connelly, Blake Studies 6:2 [1975] 179-87).
32
del. boxed 31 after "The Little Girl Lost" [but retain boxed 34]
n 8:
[after "protection"]: ^ (see design for plate 36)
42
n 9:
"The Poison Tree" s.b. "A Poison Tree"
48
[2nd para., after Night Thoughts]: (1743) s.b. (1743-45)
[last para.] woks s.b. works
54
n 7, line 6:
[after "Odyssey"] ^ comma [i.e., close parenthetical clause beginning "who", line 5]
58
n 9:
plate 35 s.b. plate 5/2
63
9/6:21 [third line of poetry from bottom]:
But Oothoon is not so,
s.b.
But Oothoon is not so;
66
[2nd para., 6th line]: Treatise on s.b. Treatise Concerning
[2nd para.. 7th line]: 1788 s.b. 1784
[3rd para., 3rd line]: quarter s.b. third
67
[2nd para., 3rd line]: Treatise of s.b. Treatise Concerning
[next-to-last para., 9th line, re Michael Phillips ]: (2007) s.b. (2009)
[next-to-last para., 12th line, re Huntington Library Quarterly]: 48 s.b. 58
69
n 4 [at end]: ^ On "vale of death," see Psalm 23:4.
n 8 [at end]: ^ On "thirty-three," see headnote.
71
n5 [after Religion]: ^ (p. 7 herein).
79
[top of page]: move boxed 21 up to top right opposite nude man's head.
80
line 5: plate 23, first line [beginning "greatest man"] should be flush left.
83
line 3: Louis XIV's s.b. Louis XVI's
99
n9: McClean s.b. McLean
117
n 3, last line:
^ The design (p. 118) appears at the top of plate 5.
144
[1st para., 5th line]:
seen from the rear
s.b.
his head in profile
[2nd para., 2nd line from end, after "incompatibility"]: ^ comma
173
n 5: [in parentheses]:
see design, 47/43. Cf.
s. b.
see design, 47, p. 201 herein, and
[continue sentence with "Blake's encounter with Los in Felpham, p. 477 herein."]
201
n 1: add new sentence:
(Cf. M 21 in Bentley; in Blake Archive: Copy A, object 21; Copy C, object 46.)
208
line 18: del. "and" [before De Luca]
line 19: [after ff] ^ and Paul Youngquist, Studies in Romanticism 32 (1993).
210
line 6: Enthusiatically s.b. Enthusiastically
221
[right margin, after line 25 of plate 11, and after "but a Shade?"]
bf, enlarge, and place in box: 12
239
n 9: Whitsun s.b. Whitson
264
[first two lines on this page]:
^ hyphen [after "Divine" (end of line)]
^ hyphen [before "Humanity" (beginning of next line)]
289
n 1:
line 2 [after "extrapolated from the": five s.b. four
line 3 [after "Joseph"} ^ (Matthew 1:3-6)
after 294
[color plate 9, caption (last line)]:
(see p. 96) s.b. (see pp. 96, 509).
[color plate 10, caption]
picture frame on the right
s.b.
picture frame on the left
318
81:15:
But Fear s.b. but Fear
328
n 8: sensory s.b. sensual
347
n.5: Art of the Book s.b. Idea of the Book
349
[headnote, first para., lines 15-16]
contradition s.b. contraction
Milton 13 s.b. Milton 14/13
Jerusalem 35 s. b. Jerusalem 39 / 35
350
[end of headnote, line 4 from bottom]
Paley, The Traveller in the Evening (2004)
s.b.
Paley, The Traveller in the Evening (2003)
351
n 6:
demonness s.b. demoness
Del. last sentence [from "She is" to "Misery."]
Replace with:
Both "Misery" and "Miser" derive from the Latin adjective miser, wretched.
360
[dagger note]: Harriett s.b. Harriet
408
[4th line on page]: break the line after "Heavenly" instead of "the"
427
n 4:
[after "Flaxman"] change semicolon to comma
440
n 5, line 4:
^ and [after "Palmer"]
447
n9, line 5:
Paul s.b. Peter [twice!]
471
[correct date of letter]:
July 2, 1800
s.b.
August 26, 1799
n 1
del. last sentence:
[After "patrons" delete the period]: ^ (see n. 4, p. 493).
[New last sentence]:
^ For this letter's first page, see www.loc.gov/rr/rarebook/rosenwald-blake.html
483
[last line, before notes]: Person s.b. Persons
475
n 1:
[change web address]
www.motco.com/blake-william/
s.b.
507
n 4:
Lambeth, s.b. Lambeth; [change comma to semicolon]
509
n 9:
[change ] (Butlin, 261)
[to] (color plate 9).
510
[dagger note]:
[4th line from bottom]: inquiry s.b. inquirer
514
[in Samuel Palmer's letter, last line of 1st paragraph]:
confined s. b. confused
515
[last full para.]
[line 1]: Albrecht s.b. Albert
[line 4]: shaped s.b. draped
600
[At the end of the first full para. insert a period] ^ .
603
[under 1757]
[change] Carnaby Market
[to] now Broadwick
604
[under 1787, line 4]:
Robert's spirt s.b. Robert's spirit.
605
[under 1799]
[italicize]: Narrative of the Mutiny on the Bounty
613
[7th name on this page]
Patenude s. b. Patenaude
619
[after Yoder] ^ Youngquist, Paul 208