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  • I have no enemy on earth

    This is, indeed, the case, and this fact deeply complicates the novel. The Creature
    incriminates Justine not because he knows, as with William, of a connection to the
    Frankenstein household, but because she is a person whose ordinary sympathies, he
    presumes, would be blocked in his presence. Without thinking, he too victimizes Justine,
    and he does it on the grounds, since sympathy is more readily expected of women, of
    her gender. For his explanation, see II:8:35.

  • 402

  • No creature

    Victor's unassuming choice of language, on a second reading, immediately brings to
    mind his treatment of his own "creature."

  • 401

  • This noble war in the sky

    This seemingly offhand sentimentalism is in actuality an exceedingly subtle move on
    Mary Shelley's part, suggestive of how dangerous unexamined metaphors can be, especially
    those that stem from our day-to-day existence and common practices. Victor Frankenstein,
    deeply aware from his scientific experiments that electricity achieves its dynamic
    energy from the interplay of polarities, here sees in the heavens an example of that
    polarity writ large and, as it were, iconically—as elemental warfare. He will almost
    immediately transfer that icon into an earthly counterpart, a permanent struggle between
    positive and negative poles, by which he respectively denominates himself and his
    Creature as good and evil, as figures of God and Satan. Thus, almost unconsciously
    adopting a quasi-divine sign, Victor reinforces the animosity that allowed him conveniently
    to categorize, externalize, and thus alienate as Other the Creature whom he brought
    to life and then left to his own devices (see I:4:3 and note).

  • 400

  • noble creature

    It is probably too early in the novel for the intonation of this phrase to resonate
    fully, but by the time Victor has finished recounting his experiences and Walton repeats
    these same sentiments (I:L2:4 and note), the reader will be ready to identify the
    prototype standing behind this characterization as being that of Satan in Milton's
    Paradise Lost.

  • 399

  • "What a noble fellow!"

    In I:L4:21, Walton also connects Victor with this attribute: "He must have been a
    noble creature in his better days." Nobility would appear to include a capacity for
    self-abnegation and thus to be incompatible with the burning force of vengeance that
    drives so much of the action of this novel.

  • 398

  • a child picking up shells

    Isaac Newton wrote:

    I do not know what I may appear to the world, but to myself I seem to have been only
    like a boy playing on the sea-shore, and diverting myself in now and then finding
    a smoother pebble or a prettier shell than ordinary, whilst the great ocean of truth
    lay all undiscovered before me.

    -- Louis Trenchard More, Isaac Newton: A Biography (New York: Scribner's, 1934), p.
    664.

    Samuel Johnson alludes to this comment in Rambler 83:

    To mean understandings, it is sufficient honour to be numbered amongst the lowest
    labourers of learning; but different abilities must find different tasks. To hew stone,
    would have been unworthy of Palladio; and to have rambled in search of shells and
    flowers, had but ill-suited with the capacity of Newton.

  • 397

  • the never-dying worm

    That is, remorse.

  • 396

  • nervous fever, which confined me for several months

    The major symptom of a nervous fever in the eighteenth century is a total want of
    strength. Thus, Victor's confinement to his bed in an invalid state for months would
    not necessarily have seemed extreme to a contemporary reader. Still, by any measure
    his appears to be no ordinary illness. Since medical terminology has changed radically
    since the novel was written, it is not easy to transpose Victor's disorder into a
    modern equivalent. Certainly, it would seem to originate in what is now called a nervous
    breakdown: Victor's past record of constant fevers and what appear to be anorexic
    symptoms suggest a systemic collapse of some magnitude.

  • 395

  • nervous fever

    This was the exact term Victor used two chapters earlier to describe his long illness:
    see I:4:17 and note.

  • 394

  • Neither of us possessed the slightest pre-eminence over the other

    Again, as earlier (I:1:12) in this first chapter, Mary Shelley lays emphasis on a
    non-competitive educational environment and the kind of non-coercive pedagogy employed
    by her father.