4074. Robert Southey to John Taylor, 24 October 1823
Address: To/ John Taylor Esqre/ at Mrs Taylors/ Market-Place/ Retford
Stamped: KESWICK/ 298
Seal: red wax, design illegible
MS: Beinecke Library, Osborn MSS File ‘S’, Folder 14181. ALS; 4p.
Unpublished.
The three sheets H. J. K. require a great deal of pruning.
It is a safe principle to say that every thing should be cut out in which the author, writing under the influence of personal feelings has expressed himself in a manner which may very possibly be injurious to others & hurtful in its consequences to himself. Upon this principle I would strike out the passage part of the speech of Sophocles pp. 109–10. from “Chlorus grew rich – to – the less for Sophocles.”
Personal as what precedes it is, it may I think stand, because its application will not be understood even by the parties themselves.
I would strike also out also the first paragraph in the speech of Pericles p111.
The second sentence of that paragraph is true, but the first is not, & would be deservedly deemed mischievous.
I hardly know what to say respecting the seventh Conversation,
which is altogether such as Voltaire
would have written, – & yet the difference between Voltaire & Landor is as great in every thing as between French & Englishman. Had the characters of the Dialogue been imaginary, the satire would not be exaggerated; I know enough of Catholic casuistry to say this: but <it> is so as applied to Louis 14. & appears even more so than it is. Xxx I should rather not lose the whole, & yet know not how to preserve it. Might it pass with the following corrections?
P 121 dele – on much slighter we read in the Old Testament.
122 line 7 – for God Almighty, read their Deity, – or omit the sentence.
125. for a clyster, read an enema – & omit the note, for the Latin hymn contains nothing in its meaning to justify the ridicule.
If you think these alterations insufficient – as I fear they are, to remove xx serious objections against the whole Conversation, – let the whole be omitted: as the safest, & I believe the best course. What is really just in it, the author may introduce in an unobjectionable form.
p. 140 insert asterisks or lines – in place of the words Edinburgh, Valpy, & Classical.
142. We must begin to expunge from One of these worthies – where to end I know not, whether at x xx “the same patriot? p. 144, or if what may follow in the ensuing sheet will require farther pruning.
I have not seen Charles Lambs letter to me,
but have just heard in what temper it is written. When I reach London I shall if it requires <from me> any thing like explanation, or vindication xxxxxxx xxxxx say what is fitting at the end of the next Q Review. If any part needs a personal reply, that must be made in private.
But I hope & trust that no intemperance or injustice on his xxxxxx <part> will provoke in me a feeling of anger toward one whose genius I have always so heartily admired, & whose goodness of heart I have always so thoroughly respected. My disposition (thank God) is not irritable, – & with me at least, kindly feelings of nearly thirty years standing, are not easily cast off.
I remain Sir
Yrs faithfully
Robert Southey.