756

  • Increase of knowledge . . . was

    The Creature once again echoes the opening soliloquy of Byron's Manfred (1817) (see
    II:5:18 for the earlier instance).

  • 755

  • the inclemency of the season, and still more from the barbarity of man

    The Creature, who appears to educate himself by a process of progressive binary distinctions,
    here broaches his master categories, nature and humanity, both of them, given the
    season of his birth and the shock of his first human encounters, seemingly inhospitable
    to him.

  • 754

  • If our impulses were confined to hunger, thirst, and desire, we might be nearly free

    Although Victor cannot know yet what is fully involved in his philosophical opinings,
    the questions of what constitutes human identity and how humans may be free will turn
    out to be major concerns of this second volume of the novel. As with the previous
    sentence, Victor is here in the process of unconsciously setting the stage for a major
    development in his education.

  • 753

  • I improved more rapidly

    This is a nice detail in itself but not wholly devoid of further import. However boastful
    the Creature may be about his advancement, the important point, and one that has been
    slowly dawning on the reader, is that he is extremely intelligent. Like his "father,"
    he is superior to his fellow-students (I:3:2). With his great stature, his exquisitely
    fine feelings, and his mental quickness, he should have been equipped, in Victor's
    early aspiration, to be a "new species" (I:3:8) of superhuman being. Instead, he has
    been spurned.

  • 752

  • an imperfect and solitary being

    The Creature's enforced loneliness has been physically brought home to him, but that
    he should already conceive of himself at this early stage of his experience as flawed
    seems to involve progress through social rejection to a new and not exactly liberating
    stage of self-consciousness.

  • 751

  • immense mountains and precipices

    The reader observes a carefully registered journey from the beautiful into the sublime,
    from what Elizabeth has proposed as a domestic enclosure, warding off the unimaginable
    and protecting the family unit from threat, into another confrontation, at least for
    Victor, with elemental nature, with destruction and with fresh creation. The transitional
    point of this rite of passage is marked by the village of St. Martin in the Shelleys'
    account of their excursion to Chamonix in History of a Six Weeks' Tour.

  • 750

  • the imagination

    As has already been evident in earlier chapters, in Mary Shelley's perspective the
    imagination is a power at once of great dynamic force and ethically neutral in its
    operations, leading to good or evil ends depending on the psychological framework
    in which it exists. The darker side of this mental attribute has been especially invoked
    as events in the novel have taken a tragic turn: see, for instance, I:3:7 and note,
    I:4:18 and note, I:6:27 and note.

  • 749

  • I gnashed my teeth

    The same characteristic has been the subject of our recent focus, as Victor's anguished
    frustration in Justine's prison cell issues in this extraordinary physical reaction
    (I:7:27). Earlier we witnessed the same phenomenon when Victor was brought aboard
    Walton's ship (I:L4:10 and note), which, since it is an event almost contemporary
    with his present narrative account must give us a sense of how habitual this reaction
    has become; also how revelatory of psychological (and moral) disturbance it is. Two
    other characters engage in the same passionate behavior: the Creature (III:3:13) and
    Milton's Satan.

  • 748

  • I exclaimed

    It is a curious coincidence that the last time Victor called upon the heavens (I:6:22)
    he instantly beheld his Creature. If Mary Shelley intended to signify something through
    this coincidence, she certainly left no hint, and it has not been explained by commentators.

  • 747

  • I ardently wished to extinguish that life

    Heavy irony attends this choice of diction. Not only are we reminded of the "ardent"
    desire with which, when young, Victor (I:2:7) (and Walton—I:L1:2) eagerly pursued
    scientific knowledge, but we can associate with that innocent desire the more complicated
    ardency driving Victor obsessively toward the scientific breakthrough that was the
    birth of this Creature: see I:3:1 and note. This is the point in the novel when the
    language of intense love first is used to embody the designs of a passionate hatred.