408

  • not by emulation

    Modern pedagogy might admiringly term this a wholly noncompetitive educational environment.
    Even that description, however, might be too bland for the usage of Mary Shelley's
    day. Johnson's 1755 Dictionary defines "emulation" in a surprisingly harsh manner:

    • Rivalry; desire of superiority
    • Envy; desire of depressing another; contest; contention; discord
  • 407

  • No father could claim the gratitude

    The terms have grown increasingly self-centered, until here Victor casts himself in
    an absolute posture, anticipating a never-ending gratitude by the very function of
    his bestowing animation on his creation. As usual, Paradise Lost presents the complementary,
    though ironic text, in Satan's desire to escape what he considers a necessitated,
    automatic response to God's genesis of spiritual and corporeal being:

         lifted up so high
    I sdeined subjection, and thought one step higher
    Would set me highest, and in a moment quit
    The debt immense of endless gratitude,
    So burdensome still paying, still to owe. . . .
    --IV.49-53

  • 406

  • the misery that I then endured

    In contrast to the shared grief and affection of Elizabeth and Justine, Victor has
    immured himself in a barricaded isolation, unable to attract sympathy and, through
    his lack of candor, unable also truly to offer it. That "misery" is the last noun
    of Volume I, as "disaster" was the first (I:L1:1), brings the reader full circle within
    that sense of perilous enclosure.

  • 405

  • none but the devil

    Mary Shelley characteristically complicates the moral lines here. Even as Justine
    is called a "monster," she resorts to her own habitual modes of religious instruction
    to categorize the behavior of the murderer. That she happens to use the same terminology
    as Victor does is a nice irony. But if we then seriously accept his own claim of ultimate
    responsibility for this debacle, Justine's invocation of the devil is tantamount to
    an ironic accusation against Victor, implicitly inverting his earlier (I:3:8) moral
    exoneration of himself as a godlike creator.

  • 404

  • I paid no visit to Geneva

    The trip home, as Victor testified in the preceding chapter (I:2:8), would doubtless
    be long and arduous, but his passing two years without concern for his family indicates
    the obsessiveness of his scientific pursuits and a concomitant retreat from normative
    social ties.

  • 403

  • I have no enemy on earth

    This is, indeed, the case, and this fact deeply complicates the novel. The Creature
    incriminates Justine not because he knows, as with William, of a connection to the
    Frankenstein household, but because she is a person whose ordinary sympathies, he
    presumes, would be blocked in his presence. Without thinking, he too victimizes Justine,
    and he does it on the grounds, since sympathy is more readily expected of women, of
    her gender. For his explanation, see II:8:35.

  • 402

  • No creature

    Victor's unassuming choice of language, on a second reading, immediately brings to
    mind his treatment of his own "creature."

  • 401

  • This noble war in the sky

    This seemingly offhand sentimentalism is in actuality an exceedingly subtle move on
    Mary Shelley's part, suggestive of how dangerous unexamined metaphors can be, especially
    those that stem from our day-to-day existence and common practices. Victor Frankenstein,
    deeply aware from his scientific experiments that electricity achieves its dynamic
    energy from the interplay of polarities, here sees in the heavens an example of that
    polarity writ large and, as it were, iconically—as elemental warfare. He will almost
    immediately transfer that icon into an earthly counterpart, a permanent struggle between
    positive and negative poles, by which he respectively denominates himself and his
    Creature as good and evil, as figures of God and Satan. Thus, almost unconsciously
    adopting a quasi-divine sign, Victor reinforces the animosity that allowed him conveniently
    to categorize, externalize, and thus alienate as Other the Creature whom he brought
    to life and then left to his own devices (see I:4:3 and note).

  • 400

  • noble creature

    It is probably too early in the novel for the intonation of this phrase to resonate
    fully, but by the time Victor has finished recounting his experiences and Walton repeats
    these same sentiments (I:L2:4 and note), the reader will be ready to identify the
    prototype standing behind this characterization as being that of Satan in Milton's
    Paradise Lost.

  • 399

  • "What a noble fellow!"

    In I:L4:21, Walton also connects Victor with this attribute: "He must have been a
    noble creature in his better days." Nobility would appear to include a capacity for
    self-abnegation and thus to be incompatible with the burning force of vengeance that
    drives so much of the action of this novel.