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  • motion of every muscle . . . extremities of my limbs The oddity of this observation seems to be directly based in Victor's experience
    as a physiologist. What the reader cannot miss, however, is the extent of self-absorption
    that could lead a man in the process of discovering his wife's corpse to note his
    own bodily symptoms with such detached scrupulosity.
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  • most miserable of mortals The terms here have a strongly echoing effect, returning us to the language in which
    the Creature and Victor acknowledged their similarities toward the end of the colloquy
    on the Mer-de-Glace (II:8:36, II:9:2, II:9:5).
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  • the most distinguished natural philosophers In general terms England was the center for scientific knowledge in the Europe of
    the late Enlightenment. A major reason for this was the presence of the Royal Society
    for the Improvement of Natural Knowledge, founded in 1660 shortly after the restoration
    of Charles II: its periodical, Philosophical Transactions, was still in Mary Shelley's
    day the principal scientific journal of the world. The president of the Royal Society
    at the time of the publication of Frankenstein was Sir Joseph Banks, one of the great
    explorers and botanists of the eighteenth century. Although Banks's diverse interests
    would not have specifically engaged Victor Frankenstein, we can be sure that his example
    would have been a guiding light for Walton. That of his successor, Sir Humphrey Davy,
    however, would have equally drawn Victor's admiration, since he was perhaps the premier
    scientist experimenting with the chemical effects of electricity in the first quarter
    of the nineteenth century.

    Percy Bysshe Shelley, it should be noted, attended a number of anatomical lectures
    by John Abernethy in 1811.

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  • Towards morning . . . night-mare This appears to be a further application of Coleridge's writings to the general tenor
    of the novel. His "Pains of Sleep," in which he recounts the psychic repercussions
    of a nightmare induced by opium, was published in 1816, shortly before Mary Shelley
    began writing Frankenstein.
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  • his more than daughter

    In the 1818 edition Elizabeth is the daughter of Alphonse's deceased sister (see I:1:7).
    Although in the 1831 edition her parentage is distanced, she retains this same designation
    of being "more than daughter." The terms recall the rhetoric in which she herself,
    in her dungeon, addressed Justine (see I:7:23). Even more so, they echo Victor's own
    description of her in their youth, in the revised 1831 edition (see 1831:I:1:10),
    and thus strongly suggest that there Mary Shelley was attempting to draw together
    these linguistic echoes to emphasize the inbred, almost incestuous, closeness of the
    family. As elsewhere, the echoes may intimate that the bourgeois domestic affections
    are not an unmixed blessing.

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  • Suddenly the broad disk of the moon arose Since the rising of the moon is, like the dawning of the sun, a phenomenon marked
    almost wholly by its gradual character, the reader can attribute this statement either
    to Mary Shelley's desire for a gothic ambience or, more consistent with her art, to
    Victor's overheated imagination. Since the previous paragraphs have, through the foreshortening
    of time, already hinted at his surrender to mania, this could be intended as a further
    example of the slippage of his sense of reality.
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  • apparition of the monster The undertone in which the text, as Walton reasserts his control over it, questions
    the statements of its narrators continues here as Walton twice—and in the formulation
    of a logical proof ("conviction of the truth" . . . "Such a monster has then really
    existence")—thoughtlessly borrows Victor's diction to describe the Creature. Careful
    readers will remember that the "apparition . . . seen from our ship" was described
    very differently at the time (I:L4:3).
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  • the monster of my creation Of all Victor's terms for the being he has brought to life this seems the most directly
    applicable to a true understanding of the dynamics that underlie the identification
    of him as monstrous. No longer merely a "monster" in and of himself, here the Creature
    is designated as being created in such a form. Victor thus tacitly acknowledges his
    responsibility for making his Creature monstrous, whether in deed or by the mere utterance
    of the word.
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  • the monster . . . the daemon The interchangeability of this nomenclature is by this point in Victor's career habitual.
    The Creature is thoroughly demonized in his mind.
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  • it modelled my feelings Whether impelled by the verb "modelled" (1818) or "moulded" (1831), this is a fascinating
    phrase. In the second case, although the revised edition lacks the epigraph from Milton's
    Paradise Lost that marks the original title page ("Did I request thee, Maker, from
    my clay / To mould me Man?"—X.743-44 ), Mary Shelley's recast diction seems to recall
    it with a deliberate irony. In this reconstitution the new Adam, lacking all free
    will, is animated by his own revenge, which is the pattern, the "mould," established
    by Satan in Milton's epic.

    On a mundane rather than cosmic level, however, we might want to contemplate what
    it is to have one's entire emotional life formed by the sentiment of revenge? In accord
    with the loss of "voluntary thought" mentioned in the previous sentence, Victor also
    gives up any feeling, any instinctual sense of identification, that might lead him
    away from his obsessive rage against his double. He thus confesses himself as being
    wholly shaped, both intellectually and emotionally, by this bond of negation. As he
    embarks on a pursuit of high adventure, he casts himself, ironically, as a totally
    passive victim of his own choosing.