936

  • I thought him as beautiful as the stranger

    The additional element that Safie brings to the emotional dynamics by which the Creature
    learns what it is to enjoy a full humanity is erotic love. That Felix responds so
    wholly to her presence as to seem physically transfigured perhaps underscores the
    emphasis the Creature will hereafter place upon the creation of a mate that may, he
    might hope, in some small part have a similar effect on him.

  • 935

  • the latter, however, I did not like

    Not only a vegetarian, the Creature is likewise naturally (like the Shelley household
    in general) averse to alcohol.

  • 934

  • This frequently took place

    It is now early spring, the first spring for the Creature, and he observes its characteristics
    without any previous example for comparison. The reader, however, already has experienced
    Victor's transports over this "divine spring" (see I:4:19 and note) in the first volume
    of the novel.

  • 933

  • they shall share my wretchedness

    Since this noun and its derivatives tolls like a bell through the novel after it is
    first used by Victor to name the Creature (I:4:3), there is a very real sense, on
    a linguisitic plane, in which the condition is already broadly shared.

  • 932

  • the wretch

    Victor reverts, as if by instinct (or psychological regression), to the nomenclature
    in which he first invested his Creature on that dreary November night some twenty-one
    months earlier when he brought him to life: see I:4:2-3 and note.

  • 931

  • the monster

    Although Victor continually flagellates himself for the deaths of William and Justine,
    yet the hardening of his language as a means of self-exculpation and displacing his
    guilt continues. As he interchanges "fiend" and "monster," he combines the diabolic
    and the unnatural to objectify and distance his Creature from the norms he accords
    his family.

  • 930

  • the fiend

    This is a new term for the Creature, in its extremity indicating how far beyond "all
    bounds of moderation" (as Victor puts it in the next paragraph) his hatred has carried
    him. He will repeat it, virtually like a mantra, in that ensuing paragraph.

  • 929

  • the duties of a creator towards his creature

    This recognition confirms how tellingly on the mark the Creature had been in earlier
    confronting Victor with the habitual language of his father (II:2:7 and note).

  • 928

  • the awful and majestic in nature

    The modern descriptive term for Victor's experience would be awesome. Although he
    dwells on how satisfying is this kind of response to nature (and in the third edition
    it is particularly accentuated), it is probably so because of its reliable alterity
    from his own situation. In a few paragraphs, with startling irony, he will have that
    dependability rudely broken, and the sublime will come directly home to the human
    who, thinking to master it, had fled from its tremendous power.

  • 927

  • that could not be

    This phrase carries a significant freight. Although it might be read as one more occasion
    in which Victor yields up his distinctive identity, substituting an obscure destiny
    in the process of fulfillment for his innate responsibility for events, in fact this
    necessity is driven by his own remorse, which is so acute that it can never be assuaged.
    Although he seems unaware of what he is doing, he is actually claiming responsibility
    for that destiny.