724

  • gnashing of teeth

    In his pain and anger the Creature imitates the actions of Victor Frankenstein twice
    noted in the first volume (I:L4:10 and note; I:7:27 and note) and again at the beginning
    of the second (II:1:6 and note). The Creature will again be portrayed as gnashing
    his teeth in the third volume (III:3:13). The prototype for this behaviour remains
    the Satan of Milton's Paradise Lost, VI.340.

  • 725

  • I determined to go alone

    It is of some use to the design of Frankenstein that Victor go onto the Mer de Glace
    by himself. At the same time, his rationale, that another human being would "destroy"
    what he considers its "solitary grandeur," is characteristic of his constitutional
    withdrawal into a contemplative introversion.

  • 726

  • a godlike science

    This seems another connection with legendary associations of Prometheus. In Percy
    Shelley's Prometheus Unbound, Asia, the Titan's consort, credits him with responsibity
    for our access to language: "He gave man speech, and speech created thought,/ Which
    is the measure of the universe" (II.iv.72-73).

  • 669

  • I did not strive to controul them

    The power of the Creature's rage is shocking, perhaps as well to himself after having
    spent an entire year in isolation and under a regimen of strict and carefully enforced
    self-control. The infinitive, however, reminds us how severely that control has been
    earlier exercised by him. It might likewise call to mind the lack of restraint with
    which Victor Frankenstein pursued the researches that resulted in the Creature's birth
    (I:3:3).

  • 670

  • conversed with my family

    Such incongruity of tone can have its value (though Mary Shelley did decide in the
    third edition to remove the family presence altogether from Victor's excursion to
    Mont Blanc). We will shortly be reminded that there is another part of Victor's family
    he has assiduously avoided and to whom, unlike his conventional family, he has given
    no solicitude whatsoever. The oddity of tone here, quickly rectified by the gloomy
    weather of the next morning, almost unconsciously prepares us for the conversation
    so feared and so long postponed but now, given the state of Victor's psychological
    condition, clearly urgent.

  • 671

  • names of the cottagers

    The naming of the cottagers depends not just on their individual identities but also
    on their family, i.e., their social, relations. That they thus have several different
    names, depending on which aspect is being emphasized, constitutes a new level of awareness
    on the Creature's part.

  • 672

  • his countenance bespoke bitter anguish, combined with disdain and malignity

    The nouns here are all associated with Satan and the Satanic in Paradise Lost: e.g.
    "anguish" (II.568; VI.340); "disdain" (I.98; II.680; V.666); "malign" (III.553; IV.503;
    VII.189). And yet, the framing language forces us to consider perspective: "bespoke"
    is not the same as "constitutes" in its implicit representation of reality; and if
    Victor, even as he articulates it, openly remarks that he "scarcely observed this,"
    where, then, might his terms come from? As we will learn from the Creature himself
    (II:7:7), it is easy to insert oneself (or others) into the mythic texture of Paradise
    Lost: thus it might appear, as it were, that Victor does so first, here defining the
    Creature as Satanic not from sharp empirical observation but from literary—that is
    to say, cultural—convention.

  • 673

  • you must create

    The change in verb form to a command is rhetorically powerful, but it also signals
    a shift in, broadly speaking, the political dynamics of the novel. Victor's power,
    a symbolic extension of that of his father and family, is no longer absolute, but
    can be successfully challenged by the figure who stands in the position of his son
    and who can command superior strength and tenacity.

  • 674

  • a creature of fine sensations

    Along with his acknowledgement of justice, Victor appears at last to have recognized
    what a masterpiece of work he created only to abandon. Even if he is not reminded
    of his original ambition to create "a new species," we certainly may be (see I:3:8).

  • 695

  • Devil!

    This is the first word that Victor utters to his Creature. Perhaps, as the allusions
    to Satan in the previous paragraph suggest, it is already in his mind. But, there
    is a dimension to this epithet beyond its effectiveness as an index to Victor's mental
    state, a timeless and mythic dimension. Although rigorously suppressed wherever organized
    Christendom extended its arms into secular society, the writings of heretical theology,
    particularly from Gnostic sects, continually revert to the concurrence of creation
    and the fall as two aspects of a single event. Thus to create is to cast out, on a
    universal level as well as, literally so, in childbirth. The cast-off in this case
    functions as Satan in a dual sense—as a disrupter of the putative unity of God and
    his coextensive creation, and—from the Hebrew root—as the accuser, who here immediately
    upbraids Victor Frankenstein for not doing his duty by his creature.

    Note how carefully Milton embeds this coincidence, without heretically stressing a
    linkage, in the moment where God divides himself so as to function on a second level,
    as a Creative Word, the Logos that will render God's conceptual blueprint for the
    universe into a workable reality (Paradise Lost, V.594-617).