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  • father's dying injunction

    To disobey such an injunction, with its almost institutionalized cultural sanction,
    is to commit a transgression of substance, preparing us for other instances of conflicting
    goals between son and father—Victor and Alphonse Frankenstein, Felix De Lacey and
    his blind father—on other narrative levels of the novel, as well as other, much greater
    transgressions for the sake of knowledge. The fact that Walton is orphaned at a young
    age introduces yet another common theme of the novel.

  • 296

  • inspirited by this wind

    What Wordsworth calls the "correspondent breeze" (The Prelude, I.35), the dynamic
    response of the human imagination to natural or divine inspiration, is a frequent
    theme among the first generation of English Romantic poets (particularly Coleridge
    and Wordsworth) and has been much discussed by critics (see, for example, M. H. Abrams,
    "The Correspondent Breeze: A Romantic Metaphor"). Closer to home, the same correspondence
    will become the motivating force in Percy Bysshe Shelley's "Ode to the West Wind"
    in 1819.

  • 297

  • instead of doing harm

    This phrase is inserted in so unobtrusive a manner as to pass almost without a reader's
    comprehension of its drift. The unmistakeable suggestion, however, is that the course
    of Victor's and his family's lives might have been altered if he and Clerval had been
    candid about the depth and cause of his illness. Yet, Clerval is at no fault, since
    he, too, is kept in the dark. Only Victor at this point could alter the narrative
    logic he has set in motion: among its other aspects, his illness constitutes a deep
    refuge from both reality and his responsibility for its nature.

  • 298

  • a state of insurrection and turmoil

    As with many of her interpolations in 1831, Mary Shelley here seems intent on an early
    establishment of a pattern that will reappear and become more intense in its significance
    as the novel progresses. Such psychological turmoil will produce a state of nightmare
    and half-sleep on the night after the Creature is created (I:5:3) and will reveal
    itself in Volumes 2 and 3 by a chronic and, in the end, debilitating fever.

  • 299

  • intimate friend of my father

    This is the second close male friendship in as many lines (see the note to "friend").
    Since friendships reflect character in this novel, the intimacy Alphonse Frankenstein
    feels for Beaufort (I:1:2) and the elder Clerval (I:2:5), both of whom share a sternness
    of resolve and a narrow preoccupation with business success, may suggest a comparable
    rigidity, or at least a stiffness and lack of flexibility, in Victor's father. Victor
    will himself shortly note these traits in respect to how his father oversees his development
    (I:1:16).

  • 300

  • investigating

    Beginning here, Victor portrays himself as having an instinctive interest in science
    that will drive his entire existence, particularly once he arrives within a university
    setting and can devote himself to scientific investigation (I:3:1).

  • 301

  • I once had a friend

    Frankenstein refers gnomically to Henry Clerval, whom he will introduce, in this 1831
    edition, at the beginning of the second chapter of his narrative (I:2:2).

  • 264

  • his labours

    The pronoun is pointed, an attempt to shield Mary Shelley from an attack on her as
    a female novelist. Attenuating this strategy, Percy Bysshe Shelley himself undertook
    all negotiations for the publication of the novel. The subterfuge worked at least
    to some extent. Walter Scott, reviewing the novel in Blackwood's Edinburgh Magazine
    identified Shelley as the author. Closer to the local scene, the Quarterly, inimical
    to Godwin, savaged the novel as the production of his daughter. Perhaps, this was
    exactly why the subterfuge was undertaken in the first place.

  • 265

  • his father

    The sense of divergent perspectives between Victor and Alphonse Frankenstein encountered
    in the first chapter (I:1:15-I:1:16) here is extended to a neighboring father's shortsighted
    thwarting of all his son's ambitions. Given Victor's portrayal of Clerval as a poet,
    it is impossible not to feel the impress of Percy Bysshe Shelley's strained relations
    with his father in this account.

  • 266

  • horror of that countenance

    Throughout the novel, with the exception of Victor's interview with his Creature in
    Volume 2 (II:2:6), only the blind (II:7:16) or one who dissembles their condition
    (III:WC:35) can remain unperturbed in the presence of the Creature.