375

  • My ardour

    Again this resonant word (see I:L1:2, I:3:1, I:3:9, etc.).

  • 374

  • he muttered some inarticulate sounds, while a grin wrinkled

    There is something irresistibly amusing and at the same time grotesque in this image
    of an eight-foot baby muttering nonsense syllables and sweetly smiling. That our first
    image of the Creature is with a grin on his face, however, is highly suggestive philosophically
    and politically. The "pursuit of happiness" is a moral and political premise to the
    late eighteenth-century world into which the Creature comes as new-born.

    As for the Creature's first interaction with a human being, a reader may well wonder
    whether it registers upon Victor—or upon Mary Shelley—that this initial close encounter
    comes via the German word for the mother he lacks, Mutter.

  • 373

  • The murderer discovered

    It is impossible to know for certain what tone—whether it is shock or relief—that
    Mary Shelley intends to be conveyed by this exclamation of Victor's. In both the 1818
    and 1831 texts he almost gives himself away, then recovers before his younger brother's
    incomprehension and his father's subsequent imperious self-assurance and, rather than
    be open with his family members in their crisis, closes off his knowledge and himself
    from their confidence.

  • 372

  • Mont Blanc

    Mary Shelley comments on such a play of lightning on Mt. Jura in her letter of 1 June
    1816. In his own response to the powerful thunder storms experienced that summer,
    Percy Bysshe Shelley characterized the summit of Mont Blanc as the "home" of the "voiceless
    lightning": "Mont Blanc," lines 136-37.

  • 371

  • most interesting part of my tale

    Victor suddenly reminds us that this is a first-person narrative that may inscribe
    a personal agenda. It is obviously of some value for Mary Shelley to keep her tale
    "interesting," but Victor's recurrent concern with its impact raises questions about
    his disinterestedness and his reliability as a narrator.

  • 370

  • more creditable to cultivate the earth

    Mary Shelley emphasizes the extent to which Elizabeth Lavenza not only has her feet
    on the ground, but with her keen eyes surveys its opportunities as well. If her horizons,
    in comparison with Victor's (or Walton's), seem limited by her expectations as a woman,
    the drift of this sentence would suggest that they are also insistently humane. On
    a biographical level the passage may reveal Mary Shelley's independent distrust of
    the legal profession brought on by the problems Percy encountered from his father's
    attorney as he attempted to secure the annuity promised him.

  • 369

  • the moral relations of things

    In distinguishing so sharply between scientific and moral arenas of thought, or between
    metaphysics and ethics as branches of philosophy, Victor unconsciously begins to raise
    what is perhaps the major issue of the novel, a human being's responsibility for knowledge.
    His abstract nouns are themselves revealing: he is engaged by the "substance" or the
    "spirit," whereas what impels Clerval are the "relations" of things. Clerval implicitly
    looks at the universe in terms of communities, which is to say, in the largest sense,
    as political relations; Victor concentrates on individual matters in isolation. In
    respect to this dialectic it is interesting to contemplate how intrinsically committed
    to both its sides is Walton. That dual commitment will in the end become contradictory,
    leaving Walton on the horns of a dilemma, having to choose between pure science and
    moral obligation.

  • 368

  • this monster

    As in the initial paragraphs of this chapter (I:4:3), Victor immediately renames the
    "creature" of the preceding sentence as a "monster." On this occasion, however, the
    succession of his namings will end by adding a new, more sinister dimension to Victor's
    relation with the being he created.

  • 367

  • Monday (July 31)

    This is one of the two clearly identifiable but irreconcilable dates in the novel.
    The other is supplied by the letter of Alphonse Frankenstein to Victor at Ingolstadt
    recounting the death of his brother (I:6:2).

  • 366

  • Her mother's fortune is secured to her

    Alphonse's sister, by the conventional arrangements of the time, would have been provided
    by her father with a dowry of some size that legally became the property of her husband
    to do with as he willed. In this case the entire sum has been set aside as her personal
    "fortune" and is now returned for the education and welfare of her daughter. This
    is an exceedingly generous act on the part of Signore Lavenza, one beyond any legal
    necessity on his part.