365

  • mockery of justice

    Why Mary Shelley should begin the chapter by deliberately obliterating all suspense
    is a good question not easily answered. Certainly, Victor's remark asks us to scrutinize
    how this court conducts itself as a social institution and as a microcosm of the polity
    of Geneva. Since Geneva's republican government (I:1:1 and note) and its softening
    of class hierarchies (I:5:3 and note) have already been admiringly stressed, we might
    expect from Mary Shelley's political allegiances to witness a trial conducted in ideal
    circumstances. But that is far from being the case. Instead of a jury of peers, a
    panel of male magistrates decides Justine's lot, and to exonerate a verdict reached
    by only circumstantial evidence they employ the coercive power of the church to extort
    a false confession. Victor's private denunciation of these proceedings does not indict
    his own society or consider the extent to which his own family, that long line of
    syndics, is complicit in an injustice that is all but institutionalized. It will be
    left for his Creature, who is likewise victimized, to articulate the more radical
    implications of such a society (see II:5:15).

  • 364

  • mock at my unhappiness

    Having quoted from Byron 's writings of the summer of 1816, here Mary Shelley seems
    also to allude to the poem that same summer's experiences prompted from Percy Bysshe
    Shelley, "Mont Blanc," 76-83.

  • 363

  • the land of mist and snow

    Samuel Taylor Coleridge, "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner," line 134, repeated in
    lines 378 and 403 (1798: lines 383, 408). In the 1818 edition, the allusion is noted
    only through quotation marks, allowing the knowing reader to make the connection between
    Coleridge's sublime tale of moral transgression and the events to unfold in the novel.
    No effort is made to affect the time frame of the novel. In the 1831 text (I:L2:6),
    on the other hand, Walton self-consciously attributes his own thirst for adventure
    partly to the influence of this poem, presumably encountered among the volumes of
    poetry he read after exhausting Uncle Thomas's library of discovery. This forces an
    impossible chronology on the novel, since Coleridge's poem was published, as Walton
    dates his letters, only fifteen months before the 17--s became the 18--s.

  • 362

  • I cannot live in this world of misery

    That the forward-looking and sunny Elizabeth harbors such gloom within her reinvokes
    the dark tones that have been insistently arising in what has seemed at times a text
    promoting the happiness of domestic enclosure. Mary Shelley brings the first volume,
    the first third, of her novel to a close with her central characters in something
    approaching complete despair over the efficacy of political and social systems.

  • 361

  • microscope

    Invented by Anton van Leeuwenhoek (1632-1723) in 1674 and continually refined thereafter.
    By the end of the eighteenth century this instrument had assumed the shape familiar
    to modern science.

  • 360

  • metals cannot be transmuted and that the elixir of life

    These are the twin aims of alchemy, already discriminated by Victor in his youth (I:1:15,
    and note).

  • 359

  • extraordinary merits

    The addition of such powerfully honorific diction is clearly meant to strengthen the
    reader's impression of Victor Frankenstein leading into his assumption of the novel's
    narrative. In 1818 the effect of Walton's enthusiasm was to make him appear rather
    credulous, easily taken in by Victor's cultivated manner. The reader, of course, whatever
    the inflations of vocabulary in which Walton indulges, may yet think the same of him
    in the 1831 version.

  • 358

  • merely weaving a series of supernatural terrors

    The repetition of a note of disparagement ("merely weaving," "a mere tale") in this
    and the succeeding sentence indicate that Shelley is seeking from the first to distance
    Frankenstein from the tradition of popular gothic fiction to which, in his own adolescence,
    he had contributed two outlandish examples, Zastrozzi and St. Irvyne, both published
    in 1810.

  • 357

  • a merchant

    This turnabout is as improbable as it is unexpected, since Clerval's father's incomprehension
    of a world beyond his account books was stressed in I:2:5, where Henry "bitterly lamented"
    being excluded from the kind of opportunity afforded Victor.

  • 356

  • men on whom I can depend

    The public realm of Mary Shelley's Frankenstein is so insistently masculine that the
    reader must construe this as a deliberate aspect of the novel's construction. The
    wholly male crew of the ship will, later in the first volume, be replicated in the
    exclusively male ambience of the University of Ingolstadt and the more narrow and
    even sinister magistracy of Geneva. By the second volume the novel's main characters
    have committed themselves and the novel to a homosocial bonding of enormous force.