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  • the submission of abject slavery This is a phrase that will resonate through the final third of the novel as the Creature
    and Victor Frankenstein vie for mastery over the other's will. Although fundamentally
    psychological in its formulation, the contention, as this phrase stresses, carries
    political overtones as well.
  • 609

  • abhorred devil The repetitiousness of Victor's diction—it was "abhorred monster!" at the beginning
    of this interview (II:2:8)—seems fitting in circumstances where so many mirrored prisms
    are being deployed simultaneously by Mary Shelley.
  • 608

  • you will confirm this intelligence soon in your own hand-writing

    However varied the reasons might be for the phenomenon, Frankenstein continually reverts
    to the importance of documentary evidence to substantiate the truth of its events
    or assertions. This will be seen as crucial in the case of the Creature's existence
    and experiences (see II:6:7), of Victor's rectitude as a narrator (see III:WC:2),
    even of Walton's day-to-day account of his voyage (likewise contained in letters "in
    [his] own handwriting"). The pattern suggests that what is at stake here is the underlying
    truth of all fictions.

  • 607

  • your gentle and feminine fosterage

    This addition to the text seems motivated by a wish to make Margaret Saville a less
    shadowy presence behind it. The implicit suggestion is that she is sufficiently older
    than her brother to have cared for him when they were orphaned, though, considering
    the twin facts that she has children in her own family and Robert is now 28 years
    old, we must assume that the difference in age would amount to something like a decade
    (III:WC:11). The added phrase also emphasizes the role of feminine nurturer assumed
    by all the prominent women of the novel.

  • 606

  • a young girl

    Age is always relative. Mary Shelley was some two months shy of her twentieth birthday
    when she began writing Frankenstein and well past twenty-one when the novel appeared
    in print. Moreover, before she began the novel toward the end of June 1816, she had
    registered experiences highly unusual for a young woman in the constrained environment
    of Britain, including eloping with a married man and twice giving birth. That said,
    it is true that the author was in years yet an adolescent when she wrote this novel
    and that, historically speaking, most of its readers have been struck by a range of
    knowledge, maturity of conception, and intellectual ambition unusual in one so young.

  • 605

  • wretch—the miserable monster

    Here what had been ambiguous in the earlier use of the word "wretch" (I:4:2) hardens
    into monstrosity, a condition beyond the realm of the human. By the end of the paragraph
    the Creature, in Victor's view, will once more transmogrify into a further dimension
    of estrangement, the supernatural.

  • 604

  • wretchedly

    Here we encounter the first, ironic sign of Victor's bonding with his Creature. He
    first called him a "wretch" in the second paragraph of this chapter (I:4:2), and has
    just reiterated the epithet two sentences before this. Victor's adverb may seem innocent
    enough, but when juxtaposed with the many instances later in the novel in which he
    and his Creature will exchange places or nomenclature, it functions as a clear opening
    signal of the complex narrative patterning to come.

  • 603

  • wretch

    The Creature has been "named" once before by Victor, in the prologue, as "daemon"
    (I:L4:16). The nomenclature in which he is vested confers an initial identity upon
    him that will shift overnight from this enigmatic term of alienation—meaning either
    being unhappy or vile (from the Old English word for "exile")—to the wholly out of
    bounds, the monstrous (I:4:3).

  • 602

  • worthy of my parentage

    However odd this may sound to contemporary ears, it is certainly true that Percy Bysshe
    Shelley deeply romanticized Mary's origins, seeing her as singled out by her birth
    for great literary accomplishment. He pays tribute to her in these terms in his Dedication
    to The Revolt of Islam, the epic-romance he wrote simultaneously with her composition
    of Frankenstein. Although some commentators have seen the pressures to write to which
    her lover/husband subjected Mary Shelley as pernicious, it did not originate with
    him so much as in the milieu in which Mary Wollstonecraft Godwin was raised. There,
    writing (William Godwin) and publishing (Mary Jane Clairmont, his second wife) was
    what one did.

  • 601

  • my workshop of filthy creation

    This phrase recurs with frequency in the critical literature about the novel, partly
    because it stands in such contrast to the almost divine attributes with which Victor
    has up to now been honoring himself and his discovery. In the phrase there is not
    only a sense of the irreducibly brute physical reality of what would have actually
    constituted a butcher-shop but as well a decided undertone of self-loathing.