585

  • It was to be decided

    Victor's characteristic passive verb construction reasserts itself here, in circumstances
    where, since he has been out of the country for so long, he is the only member of
    his family without an understood obligation to the court. The passive mood does suggest
    his sense that he is trapped without a means of exonerating a person he is certain
    is innocent. At the same time, in being attached to his own withdrawal from family
    obligations, it may also indicate a more complicated pattern of causality than Victor
    might like to believe in, one in which from the first he bears responsibility.

  • 586

  • I was destined

    This phrase is accentuated by being repeated in adjoining sentences. Yet, for all
    its unusual emphasis, the phrase dissipates its power, as the passive voice once again
    deflects any sense of responsibility from Victor: see I:3:3 and note.

  • 587

  • wealth

    In order to place Walton's expedition in an objective perspective, the reader should
    reflect on what it would cost for a private individual to organize and pay the complete
    costs of an enterprise that in Mary Shelley's day was assumed by the British state
    and, because of its not inconsiderable expense, was the subject of careful and even
    suspicious scrutiny.

  • 588

  • it proved a wet, uncongenial summer

    1816 is famous as "the summer that never was." A remarkable worldwide climatic disturbance
    was caused by the eruption of Mt. Tambora in Indonesia the previous winter, which
    filled the high atmosphere with a fine ash that limited solar penetration.

  • 589

  • what interest and sympathy

    That this is secondarily a puff for the narrative that follows, openly charging us
    as readers to respond to it with interest and sympathy, should not detract from its
    main function, which is to return us to the opening sentence of the paragraph before
    and its honoring of the essential human link inherent to fellow-feeling. That Walton's
    sympathy for Victor Frankenstein should extend to the reader's sympathetic reaction
    to them both is a fundamental tenet of Mary Shelley's notion of the value of, the
    purpose for, writing.

  • 590

  • whose hands seem only made to dabble in dirt

    The phrase suggests the powders used in chemical analysis. Victor will be so converted
    to modern scientific research as to lose his earlier aversion to such mundane and
    messy experimentation. What he later calls his "workshop of filthy creation" (I:3:9
    and note) seems to reflect this diction.

  • 591

  • nature

    In keeping with the tenor of this paragraph, the sentence bears a double freight.
    On the one hand, one could see Elizabeth as wishing to hide from the darker realities
    of the world and therefore as the embodiment of a kind of bland domesticity. On the
    other hand, as we have witnessed in the previous two chapters, a human being can become
    so inured to those darker realities as, like Victor Frankenstein, to lose perspective
    and a due sense of social responsibility.

  • 592

  • what glory

    Victor, like Walton (I:L1:6), foresees glory as crowning his scientific investigations.
    The same unexamined connotations of the word touched on in Walton's honoring of it
    as a goal (note) attend on Victor's as well.

  • 593

  • the wide ocean

    The phrase recalls the isolation of Coleridge's Ancient Mariner, to which Walton will
    directly allude later in the letter (I:L2:6).

  • 600

  • wondrous power

    The "wondrous power" is magnetism. Mary Shelley, working within the accepted scientific
    discourse of her time, in this second paragraph of her novel, is carefully establishing
    a conceptual—the term in her time would have been "philosophical"—base for it in physics.
    The key is provided by Percy Bysshe Shelley's citation, in the opening sentence of
    the Preface (I:Pref:1), of Erasmus Darwin, to whom the reader may turn for further
    elucidation of the scientific grounding of the novel.