627

  • anger and hatred

    It may be difficult for the reader to suspend prior knowledge of the plot at this
    point and recall that Victor's one sighting of his Creature in the vicinity of Geneva
    does not constitute proof that he has done anything transgressive, let alone has accomplished
    the murder of William and the framing of Justine. Given what Victor actually knows
    of his Creature, this first greeting of him would seem to testify to a psychological
    disturbance, if not a real derangement. Certainly, he does not treat him as the prodigal
    son returning to his rightful father.

  • 628

  • anticipations of joy

    The diction seems deliberately intended to evoke the end of Chapter 5 of Volume 1,
    where a full year later Victor and Clerval return from their walking tour around Ingolstadt—"with
    feelings of unbridled joy" (I:5:19)— to be greeted by a letter from Victor's father
    announcing the death of his brother William.

  • 629

  • appearance, different from any I had ever before seen

    The Creature had, of course, seen Victor before, but it was by dim moonlight, with
    Victor first in bed, then rushing hastily from the room (I:4:3). This is his first
    conscious encounter with another human being, whose mundane business is wholly disrupted
    by this unanticipated and sublime intrusion.

  • 630

  • arbiters of my future destiny

    The Creature's sense of his destiny stands in marked contrast to Victor's. Whereas
    the scientist sees himself as passively compelled by his destiny within an obsessive
    solitude, whether in his experiments with the principle of life or, later, in pursuit
    of the being that is its result, the Creature conceives of himself instinctively within
    a domesticated social context where he will be guided by others toward his self-realization.

  • 631

  • my arch-enemy, because my creator

    In Paradise Lost Satan bears this designation (I.81)—or is named Arch-foe (VI.259)—but
    it is ironically reversed here to apply to the figure who stands in place of God.
    Yet, to contemplate the phrase in isolation is to discern serious implications about
    the relation between sire and scion of a type that have greatly concerned modern psychoanalytic
    discourse.

  • 632

  • I ardently desired

    Here the Creature joins the other principal male figures of the novel in the diction
    of burning intellectual ambition, repeating the phrasing earlier uttered by Walton
    and by Victor Frankenstein: see I:L3:1 and I:2:7.

  • 633

  • the art of language

    Although Mary Shelley in this chapter seems deliberately to be emphasizing the Creature's
    "ardour" to place it within the context of the ambitions driving both Walton and Victor
    Frankenstein (see paragraph 9 above and note), she is effectively contrasting them.
    In the Creature's education language has a moral function, allowing communication
    among beings and operating as an instrument by which they may think and feel in common.
    True sympathy, the object of his utmost desire, is thus dependent upon language.

  • 572

  • an unwillingness to leave Clerval

    At this point Clerval has been in Ingolstadt for a full year. Some months earlier,
    as the previous paragraph indicates, he had been introduced by Victor to the "several
    professors of the university." Here, as elsewhere (I:3:10), Mary Shelley quietly underscores
    the ease with which Victor shirks his family duties.

  • 598

  • I have communicated to him without disguise

    Candor is an important character trait in the novel, and it is to Walton's credit
    that he so naturally evinces it. His openness will elicit a similar frankness from
    Victor Frankenstein, who for the first time in his existence will tell his entire
    story. But that narration, then, raises a serious problem. Not only are there many
    signs of instability in it, the major one being Victor's wish to revise it even as
    it goes along (III:WC:4 and note); but his earlier lack of candor with his family
    and friends is akin to dishonesty, which, if so common a practice throughout his mature
    life, must raise serious doubts about the truthfulness of the narration that comprises
    the bulk of this novel.

  • 599

  • I have communicated to him without disguise

    Candor is an important character trait in the novel, and it is to Walton's credit
    that he so naturally evinces it. His openness will elicit a similar frankness from
    Victor Frankenstein, who for the first time in his existence will tell his entire
    story. But that narration, then, raises a serious problem. Not only are there many
    signs of instability in it, the major one being Victor's wish to revise it even as
    it goes along (Walton, and note); but his earlier lack of candor with his family and
    friends is akin to dishonesty, which, if so common a practice throughout his mature
    life, must raise serious doubts about the truthfulness of the narration that comprises
    the bulk of this novel.