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  • my first thought would not fly towards those dear, dear friends

    Victor's language, after so many months of silence, is transparently insincere. Since
    Clerval does not seem to notice, perhaps Victor does not either. Victor, however,
    has himself already expressed the terms of his own indictment for such neglect of
    his loved ones: see I:3:10.

  • 381

  • my friend

    That Victor is capable of responding to Walton's open desire for his friendship by
    reciprocating it implicitly suggests that there is a measure of free will still possible
    in the universe, even in that small portion of it that constitutes his own ruined
    existence. His recognition of the value of Walton's sympathy also underscores the
    significance this emotion will assume throughout the novel

  • 348

  • make others so

    The aspirations to happiness of all the major characters of the novel take very different
    paths. Although less effectual than the principal male characters in bringing their
    dreams to reality, it might be said that the women characters are all more directly
    engaged in increasing the actual store of happiness in the world, whereas the men
    in general attach themselves to a theoretical concept that rules their destiny with
    often destructive results. Justine's emphasis on a practical ethics may also go beyond
    conventional gender roles, reflecting the down-to-earth necessities of a servant who
    has no choice but to work for and with others to increase human comfort.

  • 349

  • man

    The lieutenant, earlier introduced by Walton as a person who "retains some of the
    noblest endowments of humanity" (I:L2:4), perhaps naturally thinks of the Creature
    within a conventional human framework, twice referring to him as a "man." This nomenclature
    will change radically as Victor seizes the discourse and begins to define its categories.

  • 350

  • the manly and heroical poetry

    Here the geographical contrast is made sharply clear: east and west divide along a
    rigid gender demarcation. That Mary Shelley so conspicuously calls attention to Victor's
    gender stereotyping here allows the reader to be sensitive to it elsewhere in his
    discourse without feeling that the text is being stretched to support a feminist interpretation
    foreign to it.

  • 351

  • occurrences which are usually deemed marvellous

    Mary Shelley has already prepared for Walton's receptivity to Victor's story, since
    in the narrative he acknowledges to his sister, "there is a love for the marvellous,
    a belief in the marvellous, intertwined in all my projects" (I:L2:6). In the context
    in which Mary Shelley was writing, an apt synonym for the word would be "romantic."

  • 352

  • the breaking of a mast

    Just such an event happened early on in the expedition of Sir John Ross, as the Victory
    was dismasted in a gale on 14 June 1829. An engraving of this appears opposite page
    32 in Sir John Ross, Narrative of a Second Voyage in Search of a north-west passage
    and of a residence in the Arctic Regions, during the Years 1829, 1830, 1831, 1832,
    and 1833 (London: Webster, 1835).

  • 353

  • mathematics

    The stress on mathematics seems curious, given Victor's interests in occult and magical
    lore. Still, Albertus Magnus was best known as a mathematician, and his disciple could
    be expected to follow the master's bent. Perhaps Mary Shelley also wishes to direct
    our attention to an underlying inclination to abstraction in Victor that will account
    for his tendency to isolate himself from family obligations.

  • 354

  • mathematics

    Mathematics is the one area of the scientific disciplines in which Victor already
    excels (I:1:26 and note).

  • 355

  • I expressed myself in measured terms

    This interpolation in the 1831 text seems innocent enough, perhaps designed to show
    that the young Victor Frankenstein is on the path to a mature respect for a scientific
    discipline and those who practice it. On closer examination, however, this seemingly
    innocent remark begins to build a foundation for a vexing issue in the novel: the
    extent to which Victor's attempt to condition his rhetoric to the interests of his
    listener is merely manipulative and thus, whatever its appearance, not wholly to be
    trusted. As the novel progresses, this narrative indeterminacy will touch most of
    its major characters.