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  • at one time for five, and at another for nearly two years

    Justine, we remember from Elizabeth's letter to Victor (I:5:4), had come to imitate
    the expression and demeanor of Caroline Frankenstein. Thus, having lived with the
    Frankenstein family for seven years, which is the age at which William was murdered,
    she has in some sense become a surrogate for his mother who died when William was
    yet an infant. Further in the paragraph, Elizabeth explicitly compares her treatment
    of William as "like [that of] a most affectionate mother."

    This detail, which has no effect on anyone outside the family circle, would seem intended
    by Mary Shelley to insinuate a class bias into the court proceedings. Although Elizabeth
    speaks of her almost as a member of the family, she is not so seen by the judges or
    the populace of Geneva. Whatever the circumstance that separates her from an equality
    with other family members, the important issue is the very principle of separation
    by which she can be socially cast as a scapegoat.

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  • a strange tale

    When Walton resumes his narrative in Volume 3 (III:WC:1) his words will echo Victor's
    here, as he calls the narrative a "strange and terrific story" and acknowledges that
    the "tale is connected, and told with the appearance of the simplest truth," phrases
    suggestive of how broadly the judging of truth is an issue in the novel.

    This phrasing also introduces the complicating factor of the novel's deliberately
    involuted structure. To adapt Walton's language, Victor's account of the strange tale
    occurs within his own strange tale, which has already conveyed the narrative of William's
    death provided by his father (as well as, in the chapter before, Elizabeth's account
    of local doings). This tale will be told twice more, in the courtroom (I:7:6) and
    in the Creature's autobiographical summation (II:8:33). If, in the end, readers can
    assume that they are able to sift the truth from its excessive narrative elaboration,
    the fact remains that in the official account Justine Moritz will be known as the
    murderer, and no one in Victor's family—including Ernest, who will presumably inherit
    a substantial fortune and the position that goes with it and his family's reputation
    in Geneva—will ever be any the wiser.

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  • astonishment of the students

    The condescension Victor so easily adopts toward Professor Krempe here seems to extend
    as well to his peers among the students. Within another chapter we will witness yet
    a further example of how Victor's sense of superiority combines with an almost instinctive
    aversion to those he considers in some sense inferior to him. His observation here
    may thus be intended by Mary Shelley to help prepare us for his sudden rejection of
    the Creature to whom he gives life. Yet it might also be designed to bear a double
    reading: not just that Victor's fellow-students are in awe of his commitment, but
    that they are aware of something neurotic in its intensity.

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  • astonishment

    The uncertainty that enveloped the Creature in the early paragraphs of this letter
    now surrounds Victor as well. He and Walton do not, at least at this point, perceive
    the same reality.

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  • as nearly as possible

    We will later discover (III:WC:4) that it was not "nearly" enough for Victor, who
    proceeds to rewrite Walton's narrative. But, then again, it could very well be his
    own narrative that he so conscientiously revises. Whatever the particular case is
    immaterial: what matters is the fact of emendation. Mary Shelley's deliberate accentuation
    of the unreliability of her text will recur at crucial points throughout the novel.

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  • ascend into the heavens

    Astronomy was another science, like chemistry, undergoing marked advances in England
    during Mary Shelley's day. The major force behind this was Sir William Herschel, assisted
    by his sister Caroline Letitia.

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  • arrange in connected classifications

    Waldman points to a distinctive feature of scientific discourse of the later eighteenth
    and early nineteenth century. From Carolus Linnaeus (1707-1778), who in the study
    of botany established the terms for the classification of plants, to John Dalton (1766-1844)
    who in chemistry determined the universal table of atomic weights, late Enlightenment
    science was extensively engaged in taxonomic classification.

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  • Ariosto gives concerning the beauty of Angelica

    Angelica is the heroine of Ariosto's epic romance Orlando Furioso (1516-32). In the
    first edition this is one of the works from which Henry Clerval wrote plays for himself,
    Elizabeth, and Victor to act (see I:1:11 and note). Thus, this would be a natural
    reference for Elizabeth to make, suggestive of her long intimacy with the two young
    men her letter implicitly addresses.

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  • ardour

    This notion, repeated as a motif throughout the previous chapter (see, for instance,
    I:3:1 and note; also the definition), is at last recognized here as an energy exceeding
    proper limits.

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  • ardour . . . ardent

    The repetition of wording within this paragraph (which is immediately reaccentuated
    in the second sentence of the following one) alerts us to the "burning," that is to
    say, "consuming," nature of this pursuit for Victor Frankenstein and echoes the similar
    language of Walton (I:L1:2). Variations on this language recur throughout the chapter
    and become increasingly associated with disease (I:3:9, I:3:14).